I personally like your X the most. It is a really interesting angle to get that letter. It might be a little difficult to pick up right away, but the execution overall I think is done quite well. The only complaint I have is that the X isn't as bright as your other two letters. As far as use of lighting I think that the V is the best. The tone you have applied to your photos is also very nice.
"V" is definitely the strogers right now because of the contrast between the antenna and the wall. I think the faucet might be more interesting if more of it was in focus. That may be difficult to do but right now I don't get the "X" right away.
The V is boring. The D is beautiful. The X is confusing.
The V could be improved significantly if more mindful of composition.. the antenai touching the shadows on the wall is too close, and the picture on the TV is very interesting... but only after you realize it's there...
thank you for your X... it seems like people are having a hard time with that one either it's too litteral or too abstract... but yours is just right, like the feal it feel like an old photo album from the 40's or something
the V is very nicely lit, I think that the D could benifit from more dramatic lighting. I really like the X, although it took me a little bit to find it.
the tone in all these are pretty nice. I dont like how the bottom of the faucet touches the drain in the photo. i like the one with the TV, it's really interesting how yuou can see the guy's face in the image.
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The "v" is my favorite.
I feel is "d" is a bit boring, maybe if the shot were zoomed in, and cropped closer?
The "x" is very confusing. It took me a bit to figure out where the form of the "x" was.
The lighting is nice in all of these, though.
X and D look really good. I agree that the X was a little difficult to see at first, especially if I didn't know which letter I was looking for.
I think the "D" is a real interesting object, but I think it could use some change.
I personally like your X the most. It is a really interesting angle to get that letter. It might be a little difficult to pick up right away, but the execution overall I think is done quite well. The only complaint I have is that the X isn't as bright as your other two letters. As far as use of lighting I think that the V is the best. The tone you have applied to your photos is also very nice.
the v is strongest at this time...
the d is still difficult to find...but i think shooting it again would fix it...i keep getting distracted by the scratchy reflection.
i found the x...but perhaps some cropping to make it easier...
very nice overall...keep up the good work wth te lighting.
I think the X is awesome.. I didn't get it at first but I can if I squint.. some photoshop can be done to bring it out more
The V is good as well.
"V" is definitely the strogers right now because of the contrast between the antenna and the wall. I think the faucet might be more interesting if more of it was in focus. That may be difficult to do but right now I don't get the "X" right away.
I also really like the "v." Nice how interesting you made a bare wall using shadows.
The V is boring. The D is beautiful. The X is confusing.
The V could be improved significantly if more mindful of composition.. the antenai touching the shadows on the wall is too close, and the picture on the TV is very interesting... but only after you realize it's there...
Ah, UPA. I love the angle on the faucet, but the top left arm of the X is difficult to make out and it hurts the recognizability.
thank you for your X... it seems like people are having a hard time with that one either it's too litteral or too abstract... but yours is just right, like the feal it feel like an old photo album from the 40's or something
the V is very nicely lit, I think that the D could benifit from more dramatic lighting. I really like the X, although it took me a little bit to find it.
the tone in all these are pretty nice. I dont like how the bottom of the faucet touches the drain in the photo. i like the one with the TV, it's really interesting how yuou can see the guy's face in the image.
nice use of lighting. i'm a little confused about the blurry part in the upper right corner of the D. other than that, i really enjoy your approach.
nice lighting, they all work very well as a series from the likeness of their tones/lighting.
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