I really like that "p." I don't even mind the high contrast of the light because the background is not important to the composition and might even get a little distracting. Awesome concept.
the "P" is quite amazing. However, I think you might try something different with the "Y". The ladybug on the "Y" is a nice change from the green, but I think there needs to be something more.
The only thing that detracts from these pictures is that they don't seem to hold together as a group. Perhaps if you made the Y higher contrast to match the P or make the pictures a similar color. Both of these letters work very well though, so my only criticisms are very minor and superficial.
I really like the quality of the P, and I actually enjoy the highcontrast/blown out look on it. It isolates the letterform. While I like the Y picture alot as well, I think it would be interesting to see it with a similar contrast to the giraffe shot.
i enjoy both of these a whole lot. i don't think the difference in the level of contrast between the two is too much of a problem right now.. wait and see if the rest of the series fills in that gap for you.
yeah these are really good. not sure what that giraffe is doing but he hooked you up with an awesome image. dont think you need to change anything to them
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The "P" is amazing, what timing it must have been to capture the giraffe in that position... even though it's a little blown out, I like it alot.
The P is really good, definitely understandable. The Y is ok, doesn't seem as strong cause it's not as noticable, but the composition is good.
I really like that "p." I don't even mind the high contrast of the light because the background is not important to the composition and might even get a little distracting. Awesome concept.
super sweet awesome, kyle.
I love these.
The only thing I think I would maybe do differently is maybe crop in closer with the "y."
the "P" is quite amazing. However, I think you might try something different with the "Y". The ladybug on the "Y" is a nice change from the green, but I think there needs to be something more.
The "p" is beautiful. Versatile shot for different letters. The "y" is a little less strong, but I still like it.
I really like the "P". The lighting and color scheme are really nice.
amazing..i like both...i think there is a small dark area at the bottom of the giraffe...try a tiny crop or photoshop work...
the y is also beautiful...serene...in my opinion...don't change it.
i am excited to see more...don't lose momentum.
You set the bar yourself, Kyle.
Love it.
The second one is nice compositionally, but lacks the feeling of awe with the first. Not sure what direction you wanted to go with these.
The only thing that detracts from these pictures is that they don't seem to hold together as a group. Perhaps if you made the Y higher contrast to match the P or make the pictures a similar color. Both of these letters work very well though, so my only criticisms are very minor and superficial.
I really like the quality of the P, and I actually enjoy the highcontrast/blown out look on it. It isolates the letterform. While I like the Y picture alot as well, I think it would be interesting to see it with a similar contrast to the giraffe shot.
these are beautiful.
the P is very nice, i like the high contrast. i also like the different tones in the images, i hope you continue this mixture.
i enjoy both of these a whole lot. i don't think the difference in the level of contrast between the two is too much of a problem right now.. wait and see if the rest of the series fills in that gap for you.
yeah these are really good. not sure what that giraffe is doing but he hooked you up with an awesome image. dont think you need to change anything to them
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