I see the H and the P, but I don't see the L. I think that your best one is the P. With the P you give just enough information to recognize the letter and pull out some of the nice textures of the wooden fence. However, the other two images I think need to be cropped. There is just too much there.
I can kind of see the "h" in the window, and I see the "p," but I'm not picking up on the "l" at all. I would try to emphasize the letters in a more intentional way.
if you zoomed in more to the letterforms, or cropped a bit, then they would work better. i could see the P and H but not the L. There was too much other information in the L image that was distracting
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I think the bottom one is a P, but what are the other two?
I'm not sure which letters are represented here.
Sorry about that "H", "L","P"
I see the H and the P, but I don't see the L. I think that your best one is the P. With the P you give just enough information to recognize the letter and pull out some of the nice textures of the wooden fence. However, the other two images I think need to be cropped. There is just too much there.
josh...focus on what is successful in the "p".
My guess is that if you move closer to objects (make the series close ups...you will have more successful.
right now i can find the h and the p but not the L.
the h and L are medium shots and therefore harder to control and highlight the letter forms.
I would have to agree....I think simple cropping might make the letters a lot more obvious.
I can kind of see the "h" in the window, and I see the "p," but I'm not picking up on the "l" at all. I would try to emphasize the letters in a more intentional way.
I can only echo what other people have said so far. Crop in more, make the letter the central focus, and "have more successful". :D
I love your P i think but the othere two are very hard to make out especially the UC shot I have no clue what it is
I really think the P is succesful, however I think the H and L could be cropped alot tighter.
i like the P/B nice cropping and composition, i think nyour other two images could benefit from that. and im not really sure what your theme is.
definitely go in the direction that your "P" is headed. it does work as a "B" too, so keep that in mind.
if you zoomed in more to the letterforms, or cropped a bit, then they would work better. i could see the P and H but not the L. There was too much other information in the L image that was distracting
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