It's crooked - implying movement and generating interest, positioned off-center, pops out against the background, and it's very clear what letter it is. Complete success, I think.
I think that the dynamic pose you have given the object really helps. I wouldn't crop it at all. I think that you have a good start here. The only thing that bothers me is that the lighting seems a little flat. Maybe it isn't, but other than that I think this is done well.
I think this photo could be improved greatly by a change in lighting. As stated earlier, it seems a bit isolated in the frame, and allowing the shadow to play a larger role could improve this shot significantly.
I like this shot, but I think it would be a bit more succesfull with more dramatic lighting. Although that may make the letter form less easily recognizable.
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It's crooked - implying movement and generating interest, positioned off-center, pops out against the background, and it's very clear what letter it is. Complete success, I think.
I enjoy the concept, but is this intended to be slightly out of focus?
Perhaps a larger light to dark contrast might make this more interesting as well.
Nice object. I think it could use some cropping though.
see earlier comments for B...
also consider a bit of cropping...the f is somewhat isolated in the frame.
I think that the dynamic pose you have given the object really helps. I wouldn't crop it at all. I think that you have a good start here. The only thing that bothers me is that the lighting seems a little flat. Maybe it isn't, but other than that I think this is done well.
I think this photo could be improved greatly by a change in lighting. As stated earlier, it seems a bit isolated in the frame, and allowing the shadow to play a larger role could improve this shot significantly.
I like this shot, but I think it would be a bit more succesfull with more dramatic lighting. Although that may make the letter form less easily recognizable.
this image is interesting, but i think it would be stronger if you cropped in a bit more
the only thing you might want to consider is cropping in on the F.
i'd say that the A is the least interesting of the 3, it seems flat. nice series so far, they look like they will work well together in the end.
i agree with everyone on the cropping. it could make it more interesting
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