I think that the lighting for the image is ok. I would have liked to have seem more of the sunlight on the brick. Also, I think that it could be cropped a little bit.
The giraffe...? (i think thats how it's spelled) is beuatiful not becasue of fact that you caught it while it was forming a P, but the lighting and contrast, with the high exposure makes it feel heavenly like it is tha mysticle creature of some sort, besided the but shot it is a very flattering shot
I like the lighting in this one much more than the F shot. It does not bother me at all that the letterform is a bit upside down as it is so easily recognizable.
I think this one is more interesting compositionally than the F. there seems to be a nice continuity between your images so far, and they are very easy to read.
nice image. i think it could use a bit more contrast and darker shadows. there is already some very bright white forms. might be good to have some dark areas to contrast them
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I like the lighting of this one much better than that for the "f."
I also have been recommending most people flip their letters right side up...but with this one, I don't think you need to.
Nice idea. However, I think it could use some rotating.
i think both letters are sucessful..easy to read..consistent size and lighting.
i hink the f is somewhat isolated in the frame...just be careful that it doesn't happen on too many letters.
i don't think you need to flip the B...the rounded section is pretty definitive, although it would be more interesting with some reflection.
I think your images all do a good job satisfying your around the house theme. I light the strong lighting in this one especially.
I think that the lighting for the image is ok. I would have liked to have seem more of the sunlight on the brick. Also, I think that it could be cropped a little bit.
I think the image is cropped closely enough. The B is obviously the central focus, and I like how the shadows bend over the brick.
The giraffe...? (i think thats how it's spelled) is beuatiful not becasue of fact that you caught it while it was forming a P, but the lighting and contrast, with the high exposure makes it feel heavenly like it is tha mysticle creature of some sort, besided the but shot it is a very flattering shot
I like the lighting in this one much more than the F shot. It does not bother me at all that the letterform is a bit upside down as it is so easily recognizable.
I think this one is more interesting compositionally than the F. there seems to be a nice continuity between your images so far, and they are very easy to read.
nice image. i think it could use a bit more contrast and darker shadows. there is already some very bright white forms. might be good to have some dark areas to contrast them
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