The P and the E look really good, I tend to think that the W is a little harder to pick up on just because of the spacing in the ash tray. The shape is there, but is there some way to exaggerate it to make it stand out more.
I really like your E. The lighting really helps compliment the image. The P is a little dark, but I like the white form found on the surface that the mug is on. My concern is that it might distract, maybe not. The W is good. I especially like the little white area by the window which adds some lightness to the shot. However, something bothers me about the reflection. I know it shouldn't. But, I wonder what it would look like if the reflection were softened a little.
i think all three letters are starting to work well.
the "w" is slightly more difficult to read. In moving forward you may push the use of color...red, white, etc. I also like that these all have a similar feel to the setting.
on the "p"...the object painted on the table is almost more interesting than the handle...but good control of composition on all the pics..ie nothing extra to focus on in the background.
I especially like the lighting on the mug itself in the "P" photo. The shadow on the mug closely resembles the vertical stoke of the P. I think that works rather well.
Your E is the strongest of the group. The table may not even be necessary. As it is now it's mostly lined up with the chair, making it slightly confusing. Love the wood texture.
The stick figure in your P photo is competing for attention with your mug. A similar shot with more focus on the P may work though.
Without knowing the picture was for W there is no way I would've found it.
I like the E alot, the P is well done as well, although it just doesn't seem as eyecatching as the E to me. The W in the ashtry I may not have found, had it not been labeled in the title. That said, I still enjoyed the composition of the W picture.
The P and E are nice, but the ashtray could use some cropping. that table intersecting the middle of the E is also a bit distracting, it has very nice tones and lighting though.
the only thing is that my eye kept being drawn to the piece of the window in the W shot. maybe if you crop in more on the W it will become more clear? overall looking good though!
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I really, really like these.
Only brief question I had was about the "p," but upon deeper review I realized the form.
The P and the E look really good, I tend to think that the W is a little harder to pick up on just because of the spacing in the ash tray. The shape is there, but is there some way to exaggerate it to make it stand out more.
I really like your E. The lighting really helps compliment the image. The P is a little dark, but I like the white form found on the surface that the mug is on. My concern is that it might distract, maybe not. The W is good. I especially like the little white area by the window which adds some lightness to the shot. However, something bothers me about the reflection. I know it shouldn't. But, I wonder what it would look like if the reflection were softened a little.
i think all three letters are starting to work well.
the "w" is slightly more difficult to read. In moving forward you may push the use of color...red, white, etc. I also like that these all have a similar feel to the setting.
on the "p"...the object painted on the table is almost more interesting than the handle...but good control of composition on all the pics..ie nothing extra to focus on in the background.
good job, keep going.
Interesting lighting, especially in the "E". Nice photos so far.
I especially like the lighting on the mug itself in the "P" photo. The shadow on the mug closely resembles the vertical stoke of the P. I think that works rather well.
I like the E a lot.. the lighting is great
The lighting in the P is a little flat, maybe you could highlight the curve of the letter more
Same with the first image, although the kind of light in the window is interesting
My favorite here is the "e." Nice composition and a creative idea.
Your E is the strongest of the group. The table may not even be necessary. As it is now it's mostly lined up with the chair, making it slightly confusing. Love the wood texture.
The stick figure in your P photo is competing for attention with your mug. A similar shot with more focus on the P may work though.
Without knowing the picture was for W there is no way I would've found it.
I like the E alot, the P is well done as well, although it just doesn't seem as eyecatching as the E to me. The W in the ashtry I may not have found, had it not been labeled in the title. That said, I still enjoyed the composition of the W picture.
Not to sure I see the W or not but the P is beutiful, and so is the tone of your images love the dark shadows
The P and E are nice, but the ashtray could use some cropping. that table intersecting the middle of the E is also a bit distracting, it has very nice tones and lighting though.
the only thing is that my eye kept being drawn to the piece of the window in the W shot. maybe if you crop in more on the W it will become more clear? overall looking good though!
i think the P is really cool. i like the way you use the lighting to emphasize the letterforms. nice compositions as well
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