I can see the J and the L, but not the N. It's a shame too because I think that is your best. The textures created by the cobwebs are very nice. They are compliemented very nicely by the bricks surrounding them. I think your J is a little uninteresting, but your L creates interest with the molding surround what appears to be a mirror.
i think all the compositons are beautiful. I have a hard time finding the N but overall the are quite inetresting...the J out of focus is a tiny problem...if you have time..try shootin it at f11 or hight...
other than that...this is where i like to see you taking pics.
Love the colors in the first shot. (J) Although, I don't really care for the use of selective focus on that object. I feel like you've shown us so much, why not just show us the rest? Doesn't feel like keeping the bottom of it is adding anything to the quality of the photo.
Love the deatail in the frame. Reflections in the mere are a bit distracting, but then after looking at it for a bit, it started to appear as if it could also be a window (even though it clearly is not) which I thought was interesting... added a new depth to the photo.
Focus on the last shot is confusing. Not sure what you're trying to show me. Although I do really like the spiderweb.
Like someone earlier I confused the J for a backwards F, I dont really know what to do about that. I really like the level of detail and contrast on these shots.
i really like these images. they are all very strong compositionally. i think the N looks more like an R though. maybe im missing something, but im not sure how the quote relates to these photos.
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The only was I was puzzled by was the "n."
I couldn not readily discern what was delineating the "n" form; however, the photo itself is great.
The other two photos are both clear and creative.
I like the images you have so far, especially the "F". That works very well.
I can see the J and the L, but not the N. It's a shame too because I think that is your best. The textures created by the cobwebs are very nice. They are compliemented very nicely by the bricks surrounding them. I think your J is a little uninteresting, but your L creates interest with the molding surround what appears to be a mirror.
i think these are really good shots but to me there is something distracting about the spots in the mirror.
I like the J image...but I'd like to see more focus on the lower part of the object in the J image...
the 1st and 3rd have nice textures...
The N is unclear.. not sure where I'm supposed to look
i think all the compositons are beautiful. I have a hard time finding the N but overall the are quite inetresting...the J out of focus is a tiny problem...if you have time..try shootin it at f11 or hight...
other than that...this is where i like to see you taking pics.
Love the colors in the first shot. (J) Although, I don't really care for the use of selective focus on that object. I feel like you've shown us so much, why not just show us the rest? Doesn't feel like keeping the bottom of it is adding anything to the quality of the photo.
Love the deatail in the frame. Reflections in the mere are a bit distracting, but then after looking at it for a bit, it started to appear as if it could also be a window (even though it clearly is not) which I thought was interesting... added a new depth to the photo.
Focus on the last shot is confusing. Not sure what you're trying to show me. Although I do really like the spiderweb.
I really like the "l." The other two are not as clear, but I do enjoy the photographs overall.
I love the "musty old house" mood these pictures set. I, too, had trouble finding the N. I could clearly see an F though, so it can still work.
could not really find the N but the J and L are beautiful, love the J especially, it was very un expected, but yet a pleasant surprise
Like someone earlier I confused the J for a backwards F, I dont really know what to do about that. I really like the level of detail and contrast on these shots.
I easily saw the J, and the L was very well done, however I saw more of a lowercase "r" instead of an "n"
i really like these images. they are all very strong compositionally. i think the N looks more like an R though. maybe im missing something, but im not sure how the quote relates to these photos.
i don't see the N, but your overall tone is consistant and i really enjoy it.
The N seems hard to read, but the rest work really well.
nice imagery. i like your compositions and tones youve chosen, but im not sure if the letters read so well. i wasnt sure of the N and J.
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