The only problem I have is the W. I have a difficult time finding it. Other than that all of these have a clean refined look to them. The curves on you C, P & S are very nice. The way you have the P positioned on the frame works quite well I think. I also like the S positioned between all of those vertical lines. The cropping on the C compliments it quite well.
I really like the elegant forms. I especially like the shadows in the "W" image. Don't know where these we're at but it might be cool to try and shoot the other letters with some stronger light and shadow.
I love how the first image is cropped to form the C. By itself, the P looks rather abstract, but the curving forms that make up the vertical bar are present in the other images, so I think it still works well.
like them except you have two really good ones and two kn ones --- the c is too boring compared to the rest of yours and the w is not defined enough for me
like the series. maybe could use some cropping on the W. it seems that others were having some confusion as to where the W is. im guessing its the ribbing underneath the lamp? could maybe get rid of some other image area of that one
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They are all very elegant.. the letters created even seem to fit a certain kind of font like blackadder or french script
My only suggestion would to flip the "w" photo, so the w's are right side up.
It looks like there are multiple W's in that image, the shadows at the bottom and also the fan-shaped ribs of the underside of the lamp.
I like the elegant style, but I had trouble with the W.
I agree that the shapes are very elegant. I like the objects that you have chosen for the letters.
really lovely overall...i think the W is most problematic of the group. it could easily be an M in the shadows with some cropping.
great job with the cropping and drawing attention to the letters.
keep up the good work
The only problem I have is the W. I have a difficult time finding it. Other than that all of these have a clean refined look to them. The curves on you C, P & S are very nice. The way you have the P positioned on the frame works quite well I think. I also like the S positioned between all of those vertical lines. The cropping on the C compliments it quite well.
I really like the elegant forms. I especially like the shadows in the "W" image. Don't know where these we're at but it might be cool to try and shoot the other letters with some stronger light and shadow.
I also have trouble finding the "w," although the forms overall do suggest that letter to me in an abstract way. I really like this theme.
Pictures are really nice. I like how the erosion becomes part of the visual language communicating with the architectural forms...
I love how the first image is cropped to form the C. By itself, the P looks rather abstract, but the curving forms that make up the vertical bar are present in the other images, so I think it still works well.
like them except you have two really good ones and two kn ones --- the c is too boring compared to the rest of yours and the w is not defined enough for me
these are all really interesting. my favorite form is the S but i really like the P photo, it looks a lot like an F too. will be nice to see them all.
these all fit together as a whole and work very well as a series. keep it going.
like the series. maybe could use some cropping on the W. it seems that others were having some confusion as to where the W is. im guessing its the ribbing underneath the lamp? could maybe get rid of some other image area of that one
I enjoy your concept as a whole. I especially like the graceful curves. Though, on the second one, I see more of an F then a P for some reason.
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