I really like the way your colors match the color of the bottle; there is a consistent cool blue theme throughout that works nicely. I especially enjoy the second picture, where your fingers are distorted through the glass...very interesting. I think these hold together as a set really well.
I think this set holds up well. The consisteny of the bottle in every frame really helps. However, the final frame is the key. The shot of the bottle in the foreground, but you leaving the room in the background is a good contrast to the mostly close up shots in the first three. In the first frame, I liked that the bottle was out of focus and you are in focus. It's a great contrast with between the first and final images.
I like the cold tonal range used here, and the crisp contrast on the bottle. The only suggestion I have is giving the objects a more dynamic composition or exaggerating the perspective a little more. But if it was suppose to convey that sleepy morning look it works out. :P
I really like the consistency in your color, lighting, and shadows. The narrative itself is pretty good, the last picture makes me think of a drunk driving ad though. I'd have to look at it more to think of any problems that really bother me, but noting really jumps out at me as being annoying or bothersome with what you have.
there's a sense of desperation exuding from the image, which is carried through all four frames nicely - the color, the lighting, everything....it's as if the precise moment of the dip into the depths of despair is captured.
we talked briefly about this...but i think this is much stronger overall. the cool color and simplified, almost stark, setting work well.
i am not sure that is converys the dispair of having to have a drink before leaving the house yet...perhaps the color sifts...starts black and white but after the drink gets saturated.
Awwwe...did evan have a bad day? I like the concept here... and the hue of the bottle. But, it doesnt look like there is any liquid in it when you drink it.
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I like the dramatic expression and gestures shown by the subject.. I like the color of the bottle giving a continuity to all the images
I really like the way your colors match the color of the bottle; there is a consistent cool blue theme throughout that works nicely. I especially enjoy the second picture, where your fingers are distorted through the glass...very interesting. I think these hold together as a set really well.
I think this set holds up well. The consisteny of the bottle in every frame really helps. However, the final frame is the key. The shot of the bottle in the foreground, but you leaving the room in the background is a good contrast to the mostly close up shots in the first three. In the first frame, I liked that the bottle was out of focus and you are in focus. It's a great contrast with between the first and final images.
I like the cold tonal range used here, and the crisp contrast on the bottle. The only suggestion I have is giving the objects a more dynamic composition or exaggerating the perspective a little more. But if it was suppose to convey that sleepy morning look it works out. :P
I really like the consistency in your color, lighting, and shadows. The narrative itself is pretty good, the last picture makes me think of a drunk driving ad though. I'd have to look at it more to think of any problems that really bother me, but noting really jumps out at me as being annoying or bothersome with what you have.
I agree with allan about your second image.
there's a sense of desperation exuding from the image, which is carried through all four frames nicely - the color, the lighting, everything....it's as if the precise moment of the dip into the depths of despair is captured.
awesome.
we talked briefly about this...but i think this is much stronger overall. the cool color and simplified, almost stark, setting work well.
i am not sure that is converys the dispair of having to have a drink before leaving the house yet...perhaps the color sifts...starts black and white but after the drink gets saturated.
Awwwe...did evan have a bad day? I like the concept here... and the hue of the bottle. But, it doesnt look like there is any liquid in it when you drink it.
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