Very creative, I like all the pictures, but I feel a U would be more appropriate for your "h" picture. H just doesn't pop out at me when I see the picture at that angle
I Like your theme. I like the images, however, I think they would be a lot stronger as a series if they had a more consistant tonal range. Definitly push the warm side of things.. browns reds and oranges. If the pic doesn't have any... add em! :p
My favorite shot in here is the apple, even though that is one of the most unclear letters. I really like the light and the color in that image, and I'm also intrigued by the framing. Several of the other images have that same feel, and I think it works really well.
I really your C and your H. However, I really can't get past the K created by the shadow in your H shot. But, the lighting in the shot is wonderful. The C is also very nice. The O however seems to have some lighting problems. It comes off as being very flat.
I like the lighting in D, H, and A. The D could be improved by shooting at an angle that isn't blocked by the right side of the chair. The H is being obscured by the curved shape that goes through the middle. At a slightly lower angle, I think the H would stand out more.
cool.... once again a great surprise, didnt know you could find all those letter in the CAFE and we eat there all the time, I do think the lighting could be handled better though
I like the concept alot, and all of the shots feel like they belog together. On my computer at least, the O seems fairly dark/low contrast. And I agree that the L would be much more powerfull if it was flipped.
I think you might want to flip the L horizontally so it's more legible. the o and the L could benefit from a little more contrast as well. they are a little dark and flat. i really like the apple photo, very nice subtle colors and composition.
i like them, think they read well and work as a series. i think you could make the O photo better to work with the others. it seems more dark and flat than the rest. could use some more lighting or contrast
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I think you should use your "h" photo as a "k."
Look at that shadow...(:
I also think you need to flip your "L" photo.
The "c" isn't very clear.
The "o" photo is clear, but almost too predictable.
I feel that the "d" is a great idea, but maybe closer cropping would help it.
Very creative, I like all the pictures, but I feel a U would be more appropriate for your "h" picture. H just doesn't pop out at me when I see the picture at that angle
I agree with Amy. The "C" doesn't really stand out. I think you meant to flip the "L". Interesting theme though.
I think these are a good start. The top left corner of the "D" image becomes a little distracting to me.
right now the D is a little tight to the edge of the frame...and i think that the l could be flipped. I also think there are better pics for the O.
But overall there is a great theme and some nice color palettes...
i would reshoot the O though. the lighting is flat .
I Like your theme. I like the images, however, I think they would be a lot stronger as a series if they had a more consistant tonal range. Definitly push the warm side of things.. browns reds and oranges. If the pic doesn't have any... add em! :p
My favorite shot in here is the apple, even though that is one of the most unclear letters. I really like the light and the color in that image, and I'm also intrigued by the framing. Several of the other images have that same feel, and I think it works really well.
I really your C and your H. However, I really can't get past the K created by the shadow in your H shot. But, the lighting in the shot is wonderful. The C is also very nice. The O however seems to have some lighting problems. It comes off as being very flat.
I like the lighting in D, H, and A. The D could be improved by shooting at an angle that isn't blocked by the right side of the chair. The H is being obscured by the curved shape that goes through the middle. At a slightly lower angle, I think the H would stand out more.
cool.... once again a great surprise, didnt know you could find all those letter in the CAFE and we eat there all the time, I do think the lighting could be handled better though
right now the colors aren't really doing anything for me, they are all fairly dull, Try pushing them in post processing.
I like the concept alot, and all of the shots feel like they belog together. On my computer at least, the O seems fairly dark/low contrast. And I agree that the L would be much more powerfull if it was flipped.
I think you might want to flip the L horizontally so it's more legible. the o and the L could benefit from a little more contrast as well. they are a little dark and flat. i really like the apple photo, very nice subtle colors and composition.
definitely flip the L, otherwise it could almost be read as a J.
they all work together as a whole, looking nice.
The series is good, I'm just not really sure that the C fits, and it seems less clear.
i like them, think they read well and work as a series. i think you could make the O photo better to work with the others. it seems more dark and flat than the rest. could use some more lighting or contrast
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